Thursday, December 15, 2011
Academic Language Week 16 - Credit Card Restrictions
There should not be more restrictions on credit card use. Credit cards are use a lot around the world. If these cards were restricted it would be bad for the ECONOMY because it could lower stores customer. It helps people FINANCE things they want that they can afford. Also they are use in case of an in emergency. There is people that don't know how to use a credit card but the ones that do know how to use them and for them it is very helpful for them in life.
Wednesday, December 14, 2011
Tuesday, December 13, 2011
“The Skull and the Arrow” In the Cave
If I got beaten to death and stilled lived I would first try find help. After it I would stay on the de-low so they don't know I'm still alive. After I health I would get some friends and go find them. After we find them we will kill all of them and throw them onto a fire.
Thursday, December 8, 2011
JCCS Academic Language Week 15 - Cell Phone Interview
Cell phones are not safe when someone driving. People don't understand the ASSESS of the danger of using a phone while driving. Teens death can be RELATED to why there is so many accidents on the roads. Using a phone on the road is very dangerous.
Wednesday, December 7, 2011
Tuesday, December 6, 2011
The Grandfather” Before Important Person
The most important person in my life is my mom. I know my mom hasn't been the best role model or mother, but she loves me no matter what I would do. My grama said that she is the worst mother and she is the reason why I am here. It's not her fault because everyone makes mistakes and forgive her because from the first day I got tooken away she was always there. She came and visit me as many times as she could. When I lived in Chula Vista, my mom lived in Vista and she took three or four hours to get down from over there to where I was just for an hour and she had to ride the bus for three hours. Thats why I love my mom she won't give up and I would do anything for her.
Monday, December 5, 2011
Symbolism: Symbol of Self
The best symbol that represents me is peace. I never get into drama, but there are some days that I will. I don't like fighting neither hurting things especially animals. Also I'm nice and easy to get along with. I don't like having enemy's, if someone has a problem with me I would want them to come up to me and Tell me. I am a lovable person I enjoy peoples company. I am sometimes shy I don't know why its just the way I am
Thursday, December 1, 2011
Academic Language Week 14 - Cloning
Cloning should not be allow. It shouldn't be allow because it can offend other religions. It should be EVALUATED before it is try on anything. Cloning could cause a war between countires. Also it could bring people that were very bad such as Adolf Hitler. People should have the right to say if it should be allow. By having this it could Equate to world war three.
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Wednesday, November 30, 2011
Narrator Assessment Project - Thanksgiving 2011
Brian B.
November 30, 2011
English 9 - Period 4
Narrator Project
Thanksgiving Dinner
First-Person Narration from Brian’s Point of View
I had a very good thanksgiving. I went with my mentor to his sister house. When we got there, there was a big wooden door and my mentor open it and there was a water fountain and a fire place. When we enter there was a big flat screen t.v. and I couldn’t believe how big the house was. My mentor introduce me to everyone in his family. I was nervous because I didn’t know anyone it felt weird. After that they offered me something to drink and I said “yes”. When the food was ready we sat and a big table with big chairs like the ones in movies. We prayed and then we ate. I ate two plates and I was done.After that we ate desert. Then I watch the game and then left.
Third-Person Narration Focused on Mike
At the Jammer dinner Mike was taking pictures with Brandon. Marcos was hanging out with Bella. Jammer was walking around being shy. everyone was walking, laughing, and drinking soda. There was a man giving a speech about his live and what he did . Lots of people were interesting of what he was saying. After a while you could notice people were getting bored so he finished talking and then the dance group came out. People were cheering for the dancers. Everyone had a good time people went to sleep in the bus and went to bed late. Some people ate too much and got sick.
Narrator Expository Paragraph
A narrator can influence how much a reader understands how a character is feeling. For example in first person point of view you are the main character and you know the thoughts and feelings about the character. Third person limited point of view is where you know the thoughts and feelings about all the characters, you see what they see. The difference between them are, first person point of view is only one character and that the main one and knows his/her thoughts and feelings. Third person limited is where you know everything about all the characters in the book/movies. The third person limited is more credible because you know what every character thinks and might end up doing. Many readers enjoy reading stories written in first person point of view because it gives them more of a one on one experience with the character and makes them feel like they are in the story. I personally like first person better than third person limited.
November 30, 2011
English 9 - Period 4
Narrator Project
Thanksgiving Dinner
First-Person Narration from Brian’s Point of View
I had a very good thanksgiving. I went with my mentor to his sister house. When we got there, there was a big wooden door and my mentor open it and there was a water fountain and a fire place. When we enter there was a big flat screen t.v. and I couldn’t believe how big the house was. My mentor introduce me to everyone in his family. I was nervous because I didn’t know anyone it felt weird. After that they offered me something to drink and I said “yes”. When the food was ready we sat and a big table with big chairs like the ones in movies. We prayed and then we ate. I ate two plates and I was done.After that we ate desert. Then I watch the game and then left.
Third-Person Narration Focused on Mike
At the Jammer dinner Mike was taking pictures with Brandon. Marcos was hanging out with Bella. Jammer was walking around being shy. everyone was walking, laughing, and drinking soda. There was a man giving a speech about his live and what he did . Lots of people were interesting of what he was saying. After a while you could notice people were getting bored so he finished talking and then the dance group came out. People were cheering for the dancers. Everyone had a good time people went to sleep in the bus and went to bed late. Some people ate too much and got sick.
Narrator Expository Paragraph
A narrator can influence how much a reader understands how a character is feeling. For example in first person point of view you are the main character and you know the thoughts and feelings about the character. Third person limited point of view is where you know the thoughts and feelings about all the characters, you see what they see. The difference between them are, first person point of view is only one character and that the main one and knows his/her thoughts and feelings. Third person limited is where you know everything about all the characters in the book/movies. The third person limited is more credible because you know what every character thinks and might end up doing. Many readers enjoy reading stories written in first person point of view because it gives them more of a one on one experience with the character and makes them feel like they are in the story. I personally like first person better than third person limited.
Monday, November 21, 2011
"The Cask of Amontillado" Before You Read: Revenge
When I was in my house Rigo was being a smart boy and being mean to everyone. So we decided to wait for Rigo to go to bed so we can mess around with him. When we went in his room he was snoring a little. While we were in there we were thinking of what should we do to him and then we had to go to the other side because his room smelled like feet. When we went back they put shaving cream, lotion, and they drawn on him. When we were done someone decided to throw something and run and they did and everyone left and started hiding. When Rigo woked up he went to my side and said who threw that and I said I don't know. Rigo didn't notice until he came back again into the bathroom and turned the lights on. Thats what he gets for being mean to his housemates.
post "Autobiographical Narrative Final Draft" OR "Biographical Narrative Final Draft."
Brian Balcazar
October 27, 2011
English 9
Period 4
Autobiographical Narrative Final Draft
I always considered myself a good student, until something bad happened in my life. I was living in a foster home in Chula Vista, California. I was there for a year and had liked it so far. When I graduated six grade, I asked to go to Castle Park Middle School because that school was closer than Hilltop Middle School, which was where I was supposed to go. I learned that sometimes you have to be careful about what you do in school.
The first day of school was a boring but short day. A couple of weeks into the school year, I began to like a girl in my Math class. I sat by her, so every time I made a joke, she would laugh at it. One time I decided to make a farting noise when the teacher bent over, but when I did that the teacher got mad because everybody laughed at her and she was so mad she kicked me out. While she was screaming at me, I was thinking of what I was going to tell the principal and holding on to the door. She wasn’t done screaming at me so I walked away because I didn’t even listen in the first place and she took too long.When I got to the office, I sat there for ten minutes until the principal asked me to go in his office. He told me, “This is your first time in the office” and I said, “ Yeah it is.” He then said, “ Alright since this is your first time I’ll just give you Saturday school.” Saturday morning I woke up and walked to school and waited for the gates to open with other people there. When they opened the gates, we went to a class. There was about ten of us there, and I only knew seven of them. We went in the class and waited there then I saw the teacher that was going to watch us. She seemed mean and had an attitude problem. Time passed and we had an hour left. I was bored so I made an airplane and threw it to one of my friends. Then he dared me to throw it at the teacher so I threw at the teacher. She turned around and asked, “ Who threw that?” No one answered, so we had to stay for another hour. While weeks passed, I kept getting in trouble and going to the office and getting Saturday school. I was getting used to it.
One day I left my backpack at my house so I called and ask my foster mom to bring it for me and she did. When they called me to go to the office, I saw the principal talking to my foster mom and she looked at me with an angry face while hearing the principal talking about me. Later that week they said I have one more chance and if go to the office, they will expel me. So after that I tried my best not to get in trouble any more. Everything was going good until one day in my English class I sneezed out loud because I couldn’t hold it and the teacher got mad at me because she thought I did on purpose. She told me to go outside and sit there. I got mad because she thought I did it to be funny. I started to scream and I said ,“Now I want your attention”. She came out here screaming; she came so fast I felt the wind hit my face. She said go to the office and I went there. I knew I was going to get expelled. A week later I went to school because they said they have to think about what they going to do to me. They said I was expelled and after that I was grounded for a while it was hell. Will I learn that being bad in school is not worth getting expelled. I think school is very important and you should always try your best and there might be some difficulty's in the ways but always try.
Thursday, November 17, 2011
Academic Language Week 13 - Video Games
Violent video games do contribute kids youth violence. The Reason is because they normalize those behaviors and make them seem socially acceptable. By kids playing violent video games they can get INVOLVED in bad behavior. By having violent video games it can increase kids behavior to a higher PERCENTAGE.
"The Interlopers” Content Paragraph: Another Point of View
My name is Ulrich and I love hunting. Today I am going to go hunt. I love hunting but my neighbore always thinks I'm on his territory. I hate Georg ever since the first day I saw him I never liked him I would kill him if I ever had the chance too. I was walking down threw the trees and suddenly I saw a deer so I grabed my rifle and pointed at the deer right at is neck. When the deer stopped I pressed the trigger and it hit the deer in its chest, after it started running towards Georg territory it jumped over the fence while I was following the deer. When I got to the fence it said "NO TRANSPASSING". I didn't want to jump over the fence nut I had to so I jumped over it. I started looking for the deer until I came across Georg. I stared into his eyes with hatred I just wanted to bap him. Then out of no where a tree falls down and hits us both down. I was in pain for little while and stuck. Then we started talking about how my guys are going to get here before his guys. I lied about my friends coming so I decided to be friends with him. Then I heard foot steps coming towards us but when it got closer it was wolves and they looked at me but Georg was making a lot of noice so they went on the other side and all I heard was him screaming and then I got scare and yelled and the wolves came over to me and........
Wednesday, November 16, 2011
JCCS Academic Language Week 13 - Video Games Interview
(Alyssa)- Yes I believe violent video games contribute to youth violence because they normalize those behaviors and make them seem socially acceptable
(Sam)- Yes because they desensitize children towards violence
(Carolyn)- Yes because it shows kids that violence is fun and a joke when is really sad and serious.
(Sam)- Yes because they desensitize children towards violence
(Carolyn)- Yes because it shows kids that violence is fun and a joke when is really sad and serious.
Wednesday, November 9, 2011
Third Person Narrator: Plumber, Princess, & Attacking Turtle
Once upon a time, in a castle there was a priness in a castle setting there looking out her window.
Middle:
--Suddenly, she saw a big giant turtle looking at her she gets scare because the turtle looked so evil. She ran in the castle and went down stairs and left the castle. She went into the woods hoping that the turtle wouldn't know. the turlte was behind her and she did not know.
--Later, the princess got tired and she rest. When she woke up the turtle was there she couldn't run because the turlte was there. The turtle said I need you to give me a kiss so I can go back to my normal size. She said what I can't do that maybe your trying to eat me. The turtle force her to give him a kiss and she listen and when she was about to kiss him he ate her.
After that no one ever saw the princess again
Middle:
--Suddenly, she saw a big giant turtle looking at her she gets scare because the turtle looked so evil. She ran in the castle and went down stairs and left the castle. She went into the woods hoping that the turtle wouldn't know. the turlte was behind her and she did not know.
--Later, the princess got tired and she rest. When she woke up the turtle was there she couldn't run because the turlte was there. The turtle said I need you to give me a kiss so I can go back to my normal size. She said what I can't do that maybe your trying to eat me. The turtle force her to give him a kiss and she listen and when she was about to kiss him he ate her.
After that no one ever saw the princess again
Tuesday, November 8, 2011
First Person Narrator: House Parent/Lead Staff Point of View
As I walked into boys 105 today, I thought we were going to have rstriction in our house.
Supporting Details:
Then, I tlked to the A.M staff and he said no one was on restriction so I was happy
When I looked at the dinner chart it said alfredo, so I started to cook dinner.
Later, I told the kid's it was study time and they left to there rooms and did there homework. I tried to relax but the n I had to help them with there homework.
As I went off shift, I felt happy because everbody was good in the house and didn't give a hard time.
Supporting Details:
Then, I tlked to the A.M staff and he said no one was on restriction so I was happy
When I looked at the dinner chart it said alfredo, so I started to cook dinner.
Later, I told the kid's it was study time and they left to there rooms and did there homework. I tried to relax but the n I had to help them with there homework.
As I went off shift, I felt happy because everbody was good in the house and didn't give a hard time.
Thursday, November 3, 2011
Academic Language Week 11 - Health Care
I think health care shouldn't be free. It shouldn't be free because people that work at hospitals might not get paid enough. Also it can cause government problems. People might quit there job at a hospital because they wouldn't want to be working for free. By having free health care it wouldn't be fair for other people we would be treating them differently. So i believe free health care shouldn't be allow
Sunday, October 30, 2011
Dragons' Den First Semester Week 10: Homecoming
The spirit days were pj, crazy hair, mix match, decade day, and dragon pride. For example on pj day I woked up and went to the caff and ate and then went to schoo in my pjs it was fun.The pep assembly was fun. For example, I was happy I won the homecoming court. The football game was fun. For example, I had four tacles and had a good time.The dance was fun. For example, I ate a lot of candie and talked. This week made me feel relax because there wasn't nothing important and was easy week.
Wednesday, October 26, 2011
Dia de los Muertos - Pick a Person
I plan to construct a Dia de los Muertos altar about Bernie Mac. Bernie Macs full name was Bernard Jeffrey McCullough, was born October 5, 1957 in Chicago, Illinois, U.S.,died August 9, 2008(2008-08-09)(aged 50) Chicago, Illinois, U.S. Bernie Mac was well liked by thousands of people and made a lot of people laugh. He was known for doing Stand-up, film, and television programs. Here are of the movies and T.V shows he has been inPastor Clever in Friday The Original Kings of Comedy
Frank Catton in Ocean's Eleven
Stan Ross in Mr. 3000
Bernie McCullough on The Bernie Mac Show
Floyd Henderson in Soul Men
Other people might not like him but he was a very funny person. I seleted this person becuse I always watch his show Bernie MacFrank Catton in Ocean's Eleven
Stan Ross in Mr. 3000
Bernie McCullough on The Bernie Mac Show
Floyd Henderson in Soul Men
Monday, October 24, 2011
Wednesday, October 19, 2011
Thursday, October 13, 2011
Academic Language Week 8 - Ten Commandments
I think the Ten Commandments don't belong in school. Its not a teachers role to teach religion in school. Teachers shouldn't try to CONSUME students learning about different religion. Religion and school are two different categories, religion is learn outside of school in church and school is about learning things. If people wanted to learn about religion in school they would go to a Christian school, thats why they have public schools.
Wednesday, October 12, 2011
Autobiographical Narrative - Innocent to Compassionate Brainstorm
When I was 9, I was innocent because I thought that everybody was the same. Then, I experienced that not everybody grows up with the same things. This helped me to become compassionate because I wanted to help him.
When I was 8, I was innocent because I thought my dog would live with me forever. Then, I experienced my dog dieing. This helped me to become compassionate because I now knew that pets don't live as long as human
When I was 7, I was innocent because I thought everyone had food. Then, I experienced by being picky with my food and I would throw it away. This helped me to become compassionate because I learn not everyone in the world had food to eat and people were dying .
Which of these experiences should I write about?
When I was 8, I was innocent because I thought my dog would live with me forever. Then, I experienced my dog dieing. This helped me to become compassionate because I now knew that pets don't live as long as human
When I was 7, I was innocent because I thought everyone had food. Then, I experienced by being picky with my food and I would throw it away. This helped me to become compassionate because I learn not everyone in the world had food to eat and people were dying .
Which of these experiences should I write about?
Autobiographical Narrative - Innocent to Compassionate Brainstorm
When I was nine, I was innocent because I though that stealing was fine. Then, I experienced getting school suspension. This helped me to become compassionate because I realize that stealing was bad because I lost alot of peoples trust .
When I was 12, I was innocent because I thought being disrespectful to the teacher would make me look cool Then, I experienced getting expell. This helped me to become compassionate because I learn that by being direspectful wasn't getting me no where.
When I was 10, I was innocent because I thought fighting was okay because. Then, I experienced that fighting was getting me introuble. This helped me to become compassionate because I learn there wasn't a point of fight.
Which of these experiences should I write about?
When I was 12, I was innocent because I thought being disrespectful to the teacher would make me look cool Then, I experienced getting expell. This helped me to become compassionate because I learn that by being direspectful wasn't getting me no where.
When I was 10, I was innocent because I thought fighting was okay because. Then, I experienced that fighting was getting me introuble. This helped me to become compassionate because I learn there wasn't a point of fight.
Which of these experiences should I write about?
Dia de los Muertos - Article Summary
The article “dia de los muertos” by author is about a Mexican celebration. This occurred on Nov one and two. Dia de los Muertos is celebrated throughout Mexico. Many other countries around the world celebrate similar versions of Day of the Dead as well, by having special days for honoring the dead.
the people involve are People that celebrate Dia de los Muertos to honor their deceased loves ones and who have died. the events included setting up there alter and decorating there grave. Also putting things that the person liked like food, flowers, or toys. This happen because they say that if you don't celebrate you can be hunted. As a result of this people around the world are celebrating this holiday more and is getting popular.
the people involve are People that celebrate Dia de los Muertos to honor their deceased loves ones and who have died. the events included setting up there alter and decorating there grave. Also putting things that the person liked like food, flowers, or toys. This happen because they say that if you don't celebrate you can be hunted. As a result of this people around the world are celebrating this holiday more and is getting popular.
Monday, October 10, 2011
Internet Safety Project - Public or Private Profile
I think teenagers should put there profiles to private. They should have them private because there is people out there that are very dangerous and can harm people. By not having your profile private other people you don't know might be going threw your pictures and your messages. Also when your texting people you don't know that has a profile with a hot girl, you might think that they are a girl but can actually be a old perv. Just have your profile in private don't take the risk of being in danger for your best.
Dragons Den 7: Would You Rather?
I would rather be smart because I can do more things in life and have a better job. People would recognize me for my intelligence. I would want to be smart so I can have a big house, lots of cars, and money. Smarter is better than pretty because if your smart and have money you can just get plastic surgery and then you'll be smart and pretty. And sometime people prefer smart people then pretty.
Thursday, October 6, 2011
Academic Language Week 7 - Vampires
I think vampire’s popularity will fade away. They will fade away because they are getting old and there are new horror movies and creatures coming out later on in the future. Also, there are too many movies already about vampires and all of them have the same PLOT in them. Sooner or later they won’t have key factors that other popular books or movies have. Vampire’s voices will be eliminated when other popular subjects come about. Vampires are just getting old because in every movie it’s about the same thing people getting bit, girl falls in love with a vampire, or vampires vs. wolfs. I think its time for us to let Vampire’s retire.
Tuesday, October 4, 2011
"Marigolds" Character Acrostic Poem
Learn("For as I gaze at the immobile face with the sad, weary eyes, I gazed upon reality which is hidden to childhood")
Innocent (iI know that that moment marked the end of innocent)
Zany (I cursed and spat around)
Brutal (I lost my head and ran out the bushes and started yelling old witch
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Innocent (iI know that that moment marked the end of innocent)
Zany (I cursed and spat around)
Brutal (I lost my head and ran out the bushes and started yelling old witch
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"Marigolds" Summary Poem
One day Lizbeth started thinking about her past and in her past she remember the hot summer and Marigold. When she was 14 her and Joey were the only ones living in the house and her brother was three years younger. A bunch of kids and her went to Miss. Lotties house and ounside was John Burk her son and they wen there because they were bored and then when they got there they started throwing pebbles and chanting. Lizbeth felt ashame of her behavior after doing that and she regret doing that. Later that night she heard her father and her mother argueing about money and her fathers face began crying. 4 A.M Lizbeth and her brother snuck out the house and went back to Miss. Lotties and started destroying everything and her garden with rage. Joey told her to stop and she did. When Lizbeth open her eyes she saw Miss. Lottie, she was ashame and began sobbing. After doing that she wasn't a child no more she was being more mature.
Monday, October 3, 2011
Dragons Den: Campus Donations
I am very thankful for the people that donate everything to us because if they didn't we wouldn't have the things we have. Last Christmas I got white Jordan's and I liked them and I thank them for the shoes. Also I got a radio system and i thank them too because I never had one and I was asking for one. And finally all of us got an ipod which was very nice of them because they were the new ones. I hopr everybody thanks the people that got all of this stuff to us. And thanks thhe ones who build our field
Thursday, September 29, 2011
Academic Language Week 6 - Citizenship
Undocumented immigrants should not be given citizenship. They should not be given citizenship because they can have a very bad history and they can bring it with them and then it can cause problems. Whoever is involved in the process of getting a person legalized, should <b>VERIFY</b> that person's background before they enter the U.S. Even if they could <b>SIMPLIFY</b> the process, they still need to be very thorough with everything. Because we have had problems with terrorists in the past, they need to put the person's whole life in a <b>SEQUENCE</b> of events so they can figure out weather or not they should allow them in the U.S. For these reasons I think undocumented immigrants should not be given citizenship.
Wednesday, September 28, 2011
"Marigolds" Before You Read: Moving into Adulthood
The types of fears that young people are going to face is finding a home. Young people are going to have to find a house they can afford and are going to have to pay for water, electricity, and insurance. Other fears they might have is finding a job and making enough money to pay your bills and feed yourself, also how your going to get to your job and back home. The worst part is leaving alone and when you do something wrong your parents aren't there to correct your mistakes, clean up after you, and baby you.
Monday, September 26, 2011
Dragons Den:ABC's About Me
A: annoying
B: boring
C: corny
D: distractive
E: excellent
F: fruity
G: gelable
H: hardheaded
I: embarrassed
J: joyful
K: know-it-all
L: lazy
M: mello
N: nice
O: open
P: peaceful
Q: questioning
R: runner
S: snoopy
T: thoughtful
U: ugly
V: vain
W: wasting
X: x-ray
Y: young minded
z: zzzzzz
B: boring
C: corny
D: distractive
E: excellent
F: fruity
G: gelable
H: hardheaded
I: embarrassed
J: joyful
K: know-it-all
L: lazy
M: mello
N: nice
O: open
P: peaceful
Q: questioning
R: runner
S: snoopy
T: thoughtful
U: ugly
V: vain
W: wasting
X: x-ray
Y: young minded
z: zzzzzz
Friday, September 23, 2011
"Thank You M'am" Before You Read: Going Gets Tough
There is some truth to the saying “When the going gets tough, the tough get going.” Meaning, you have the choice to give up, or you can acknowledge what you have already achieved, how far you want to go in life. When bad things happen in l,ife you shouldn't give up, you try again until you get it. Your going to make mistake in your life its natural but you learn from your mistake and try not to do them again. Always try to prove people wrong show that your better and you won't give up. Not everybody is perfect there isn't a thing as perfect everybody makes mistake such as teachers, the greatest athletes and everybody else. When you do something wrong you put that thing in the past and move on and if it happens again do something different.
Thursday, September 22, 2011
Academic Language Week 5 - Vaccinations
Children shoud get vaccinations so they don't get sick or diseases. Parents should think positive about getting vaccination for there own health and kids. Scientist have estimate million of people have been save because of vaccinations. To illustrate these factsm to you there has been thousand of people that have got sick and even sometimes died all because they didn't get there vaccination. You might think its a waste time getting your vaccination but you never know what diseases might be going around. So you don't take these chances just go and get your vaccination and avoid getting sick and your children getting sick at school.
:"Thank You, M'am" Letter to Roger
Dear Ms. Luella Bates Washington Jones,
It's been ten years since I saw you when I tried snatching your purse. I just want to say thank you because if you would of never done that for me I would of still been in the streets trying to steal peoples purses. That night I got home and told my parents what happen and they were mad at me, so I went to my room and thought about what I did. I started doing good in school and got a job at a store and started making money so I can get things I wanted. Will I'm sorry for what I did, if it wasn't for you I would be the same dummy boy out in those streets
from Roger.
It's been ten years since I saw you when I tried snatching your purse. I just want to say thank you because if you would of never done that for me I would of still been in the streets trying to steal peoples purses. That night I got home and told my parents what happen and they were mad at me, so I went to my room and thought about what I did. I started doing good in school and got a job at a store and started making money so I can get things I wanted. Will I'm sorry for what I did, if it wasn't for you I would be the same dummy boy out in those streets
from Roger.
Tuesday, September 20, 2011
Favorite Character Survey
Latifah's favorite character is the Grinch from How the Grinch stole Christmas\ because he is green.
Silvia favorite character is spongebob from spongebob square pants because he is yellow.
Jeremiah favorite character is Quagmire from Family Guy because he is funny.
Rossy favorite character is Boo from Moster in the closet because she is adorable.
ZJ favorite character is chucky from chucky because he is scary.
Ms. Priesters favorite character is Scout To kill a mockingbird because she is curiouse.
Isiah favorite character is sam Witwiki in transformers because is outgoing.
Damien favorite character is jonny truelove because he is cold blooded.
Silvia favorite character is spongebob from spongebob square pants because he is yellow.
Jeremiah favorite character is Quagmire from Family Guy because he is funny.
Rossy favorite character is Boo from Moster in the closet because she is adorable.
ZJ favorite character is chucky from chucky because he is scary.
Ms. Priesters favorite character is Scout To kill a mockingbird because she is curiouse.
Isiah favorite character is sam Witwiki in transformers because is outgoing.
Damien favorite character is jonny truelove because he is cold blooded.
Monday, September 19, 2011
Dragons Den:Life Lesson
A life lesson I learned the hard way is when my mom told me to stop put on shoes outside the house. I used to think that I would never cut my feet. Then, I step on a nail and it hurt so bad I started crying. Since I was small they took me to the hospital and had it remove.I learned that when I go outside to wear shoes because you'll never know what you might step on. So when you go outside wear shoes so you don't step on a nail or something it is painful
Thursday, September 15, 2011
plot assesment rough draft
Exposition:
Characters. Miley Kardashian
Setting: San Pasqual Academy
Conflict: Later on in the story she gets pregnant, likes to get into fights, she tries to switch her life, away from drama but she cant she is soon to be kicked out.
-Rising action:(foreshadowing)
gets into drugs, fights, ditching classes, awolling, sexual confuse,)
Complication;
Climax-pregnant and sexually confused
Falling action:starts focusing in school, getting away from drugs and drama as much as possible (getting her act together.) She starts taking pregnancy classes and starts using drugs and her houseparents help her.
Denouement:giving her baby for adoption. She starts thinking about her future. She unfortunately doesnt know who the baby daddy is.
Flashback-She has a flashback that she gets drunk with her friends and got rapped by an older looking dark man.
Flashfoward-She has a flashfoward that she wants to become a singer and help the sick people as well as foster kids.
Characters. Miley Kardashian
Setting: San Pasqual Academy
Conflict: Later on in the story she gets pregnant, likes to get into fights, she tries to switch her life, away from drama but she cant she is soon to be kicked out.
-Rising action:(foreshadowing)
gets into drugs, fights, ditching classes, awolling, sexual confuse,)
Complication;
Climax-pregnant and sexually confused
Falling action:starts focusing in school, getting away from drugs and drama as much as possible (getting her act together.) She starts taking pregnancy classes and starts using drugs and her houseparents help her.
Denouement:giving her baby for adoption. She starts thinking about her future. She unfortunately doesnt know who the baby daddy is.
Flashback-She has a flashback that she gets drunk with her friends and got rapped by an older looking dark man.
Flashfoward-She has a flashfoward that she wants to become a singer and help the sick people as well as foster kids.
Wednesday, September 14, 2011
Dragons Den: Power Outage
On Thursday evening, I was outside the girls rec watching the football team practise when suddenly I saw Alex and he said that the lights had gone out and at first didn't bother me because it was day time. I got bored watching the team practise so I went home and they were playing cards because there wasn't nothing to do, so I played cards too and then stop because I got bored. At dinner time they mad pbjs for dinner because the stove didn't work. At study time I went to girls 103 to do homework and it started getting dark so I had to leave. Since the lights were out they open the caff and I went down there and watch the movie and talk to people. When I went home Mike, Drew, and me try going back to the caff but when we got close to the red barn staff saw us and sent us home. At the end I almost got in trouble but didn't and then went to bed
Wednesday, September 7, 2011
Dog Star
When I use to live in Vista with my old foster parents they had three dogs one was a Labrador and two German Shepherd. I favorite one was the Labrador because she was always so playful and cute. When I use to get in trouble in school and had to stay in the house she always kept me company. Sometimes I got into arguments with my foster parent and I was mad and she was there for me. When I was sad and I didn't want to talk to no one she was there, like she didn't judge me or say anything that was the best part she was there no matter what I did. There is a difference between your best friend and a dog your friend will be there for you but then they will ask you questions when your mad but a dog is there and wont say anything to you.
"The Most Dangerous Game" Sequel
I woke up in the Generals bed feeling very tired. I went to take a shower and then change into some clothe from the Generals closet. After that I went around looking in the castle because i was hungry and I couldn't find a way out. I walked into these two doors and in there, I saw everything I wanted to eat there was fruit, salad, meat, cereal, and bread. I made myself five peanut butter jelly sandwich and grab a cup of milk. After that I went to other rooms but there was only beds in them and clothe. I saw this weird door with a shiny reflection, I open the door and I couldn't believe my eyes. The whole room was fill with treasure, there was diamonds and everything you can imagine. I took a lot of treasure with me. Finally I got bored looking around so I started looking for the exit. After twenty minutes I was still looking for the exit I couldn't find it so I started getting frustrated. I sat down for a bit to rest. Then I heard this weird noice like dogs barking and then I see five dogs chasing me. I ran as fastes I could but they were getting close and one of them bit my leg and the other once jumped on me and stared biting me and then.....
Monday, September 5, 2011
Dragons Den: Shoes
My favorite brand of shoes is Nike. These shoes make my feet comfortable and are light shoes to wear. In case you have never seen them, these shoes are light and have a Nike swoosh logo on it. I wear these shoes on a regular basis because these shoes feel comfortable and look good. If I saw one of my peers wearing these shoes, I would compliment my peer.
Wednesday, August 31, 2011
The Most Dangerouse Game
My favorite villain is Dark Vader. He is in the movie Star Wars. In the movie Dark Vader is trying to rule the galaxy, but there is the Jedis in his way. When he is about to fight he never backs away and you can't see his face expression. When one of his workers does something wrong he will choke them by using the force. Dark Vader fascinate me because he has a lot of power and is a leader.
Monday, August 29, 2011
Response to Priester's Syllabus
I agree with you because I find these rules fair enough to everybody. We should be happy with the rules because they could be worst but they aren't. Your post reminds me of my old teacher but she was worst because she made us write alot. One thing I don't like is that we have to do everything on the computer. I also don't like the Academic Vocabulary I don't like learn 3 words and a focus question.
Dragon Den: color
A color that represent me is purple. I'm similar to this color because its royalty and awsome. This color represent my thoughts and feelings. This color is symbolic of a winning color just like the Lakers because they are the best team. If you are around me you will notice that I love purple and black. Also this color is rare in nature, you really can't find this color in nature only some plants have it.
Thursday, August 25, 2011
Conflict Plot Summary Paragraph
When I was about to go to the pool, it started raining and I was mad because I planned to go to the pool the whole weekend and it had to rain. Thats not the worst part I had to stay home and clean my room and go food shopping it was the worst day just because it rain. Thoe rain is my favorite weather day. So that whole day I was bored and later that day it stop and I went outside to play catch and I started playing catch with my foster brother and it started raining again and I was having so much fun and the rain had to ruin it.
Wednesday, August 24, 2011
Plot: Movie Plot Summary Paragraph
In the movie, The Hangover II, the characters are Phil, Stu, Alan, and Doug. The conflicts is that they are missing the fiancee's brother and they need to get back in time for the wedding. They are talking about the wedding and Phil ask if anybody invited Alan and everybody looked at him and said "No". They didn't want him to go to the wedding but Alan was having issues so they invited him and they all went to Thailand. When they got there Stu talked to his girl friend and she said, "Since you guys going to a bachelor why don't you guys take Teddy?"They took Teddy and they went to the beach and drank. Next morning Doug wakes up feeling pain all over his body and he notice that they were in Bangkok and Teddy was missing. They tried to remember where they were all night but they didn't know anything at all. They went all over Bangkok looking for Teddy. At the end Phil remembers that Teddy was in the elevator. The climax was when they found him and went back to the wedding. In the end of the movie, Stu got married.
Tuesday, August 23, 2011
First day of school
My first day of school was good, I met my teachers and I liked them all but I didn't get the class I wanted, I wanted to take Spanish but instead they gave me Social Justice. My favorite class is P.E it is the easies class ever, you don't need a pencil , paper, or need to read. People told me that Ms. Priester was going to be hard and that she was a mean person but honestly she isn't mean at all to me. One thing I don't like about my classes is that there isn't a lot of people. Also the teachers talked to much I got bored and tired but of course they talk a lot its the first day of school hopefully it wont be like that all year.
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