Friday, April 19, 2013

JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 31 - Vandalism

Parents should be accountable for their child's damage. For example, in the teens mind, they need to ACHIEVE whatever they want to destroy. This shows that they don't know how to control their self. This also shows that it parents should give their child SPECIFIC disciplines so that way they know what to do. In addition, when parents try to teach things on the COMPUTER about how they're lives will be in the future. This shows that he teens would probably not listen. This also shows that parents need to be more strict on their kids. In conclusion, parents should take the consequences for their child's damage.

1 comment:

  1. Your ideas would be much more persuasive if you included facts from outside sources. Next time, slow down to follow all the steps.

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