Friday, February 15, 2013
JCCS Academic Language Assessment Week 23 - Dog Fighting
Dog fighting should be illegal.
For example, dogs are used to help people that are disable or need special needs.
This shows that dogs POTENTIAL is being wasted by making dogs kill each other.
This also shows that dogs are being use in a negative way and not a positive way.
In addition, dogs can't physically speak for themselves.
This shows that there is DISTINCT difference between human and dog language barriers.
This also shows that the only FORMULA for fixing the problem is to eradicate dog fighting for good.
In conclusion, dog fighting is illegal and there should be severe punishment for engaging in dog fighting. Dogs are a human best friend and are use in the army, police station, helping people with disabilities, and as house pets to protect their owners. Dogs cannot speak for themselves but people should take time and try to comprehend their dogs emotion
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Wow. I can tell that you put a lot of time into developing strong paragraph. I agree that dog fighting should be eradicated. In the future, work on adding very specific facts to your concrete details to strengthen your arguments.
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